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You need to start recording this [expletive] imo.

 

I will. I just want to make sure EVERYTHING is perfect (IMO) before I record it. Once you put out a few weak tracks, you get a bad rep, and I don't want that. I want to come out of [expletive]ing nowhere with some fire. I'm writing every single day, and trying to perfect my style. I want to make 12 great songs, choose the best 8, then record and put out my mixtape. Even if that takes another year (it shouldn't, the latest I expect would be this summer), so be it. I want this to be amazing.

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Wrote something new today, to the beat of 'My Opinion' by Mac Mall (SICK beat). You have to listen to that song to understand the structure of this song. Of course it's a very rough draft....

 

My name is AsIll, and this is my opinion

I’m the greatest outta 7 billion, heaven is my ceiling

My eyes are impaired, scare those who try and stare

My thoughts are doubling, and releasing in pairs

Humans call ‘em bars, I see 'em from afar

I’m stickin up the moon as it’s reaching for the stars

AsIll’s from Mars, a lethal virus like SARS

Spewin venom, you othes rappers just ain’t up to par

I fade like chameleons, this is my opinion

My light’ll turn yellow‘ when I make five trillion

On the streets I Sway, no defense from Tech

Usin crazy word play to earn my dense respect

Causin headrush, intoxication, and blackouts

Vision blanks quicker than I can pump tracks out

A fight breaks out, the masses tapping out

No return is a point of disabled backing out

‘Till then, I’m the who, what, where, why and when

On a scale of 1 to 5, I’m a 5 squared times 10

In the land of gangsters, conceiling, and drug dealin

I walk through the valley, and my pasty skin’s peeling

This is my opinion, I got a funny feelin

That when you hear this [expletive] homey you’ll be [expletive]in realin

And looking to the sky, prayin while you kneelin

My name is Asill, and this is my opinion

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Wrote this to the 'Sunshine' instrumental by Atmosphere. It's actually a song with a hook and whatnot...

 

Still dreamin’ of the world as the sun shines bright

Still dreamin of the world as my fam lives right

Still dreamin of the world as the night turns light

Still dreamin of the world spread my wings in flight

 

They can’t phase me, cuz I’m broke thinking I’m lazy

Believin’ I’m Jay-Z, maybe I’m crazy

Maybe it’s defiance, it may be reliance

Maybe I got this rap [expletive] down to a science

It may be the truth, it may be a lie

It may be a who,what, where or why

It may be I dream when I’m awake it seems

Reality creeps in, my dreams rip at seams

So I come down to Earth like a comet invasion

Facin the truth, I can’t keep a relation

Catchin mean stares while collecting welfare

A white boy can’t struggle? I hate to burst your bubble

Connecting with trouble like computers to WiFi

Makin bold statements that are covered in white lies

What you wanna hear is what I won’t speak

Listen to me close and everyday of the week

Presented opportunity, I just [expletive] it up

So I act all tough while I’m runnin outta luck

Stuck in a ring with my back against the rope

This alliance with dope is a [expletive]ty way to cope

They say I’m a demon, they say I’m a martyr

They say my tracks’ll sell if I front a little harder

All this talk’s stimulation for deaf ears

My rap’s a refugee like Wyclef’s here

I use rhymes to show a reflection of me

And what I see is me flowin free like the sea

No politics, prison or MTV

No divorce or disease like STD’s

I’m much disturbed, enthusiasm is curbed

I shoot dictionaries when I can’t find right words

I keep my sight forward, it’s on to the next

And I’m still dreamin ya’ll, still dreamin’

 

Still dreamin’ of the world as the sun shines bright

Still dreamin of the world as my fam lives right

Still dreamin of the world as the night turns light

Still dreamin of the world spread my wings in flight

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